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The Villages will go on with their wars and fight for their so-called justice. The Akatsuki will go on with their Bijuu catching and show true pain to bring peace. Which side will you be on?

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A Loop of Love and Pain

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1A Loop of Love and Pain Empty A Loop of Love and Pain Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:22 am

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Akatsuki Leader/ Rin'negan Master/Sage of the 6 Paths/Former Amekage/Ring: Rei(Zero)/Right Thumb
Akatsuki Leader/ Rin'negan Master/Sage of the 6 Paths/Former Amekage/Ring: Rei(Zero)/Right Thumb

Poet's note: This is a different form than the usual people are used to seeing; if you read professional poetry, it might not be so new. I, personally, kind of like it, cuz it's easy, but when read, it gets boring. Try to see the meaning rather the neatness of the sound. Blame the French if you don't like this poem's form; the form, a Villanelle. Do enjoy and please, post your comments but keep them free of negative remarks. All opinions are welcomed.


A loop of love and pain
Grasping, trapping, suffocating; tether
Hard to fight restrain

Sending pain from heart to brain
An endless fight for her love Forever
a loop of love and pain

Everything lost and nothing to gain
Endless suffers; endless endeavors
Hard to fight restrain

Searching hope, but alas, it's stained
With the desire for her love Forever
a loop of love and pain

To see her smile, I help her gain
another love; the pain, a blade to sever
Hard to fight restrain

When broken, I help her heal again
My sight of her will be Forever
a loop of love and pain
Hard to fight restrain

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